Okay, I will give you a comment on your map, after I downloaded it. Well to the first 7 points, I agree and disagree with you because it is all a matter of like and dislike. I explain it to you, for instance the red fog I thought it is cool because you can take a look over it, if you jump. so my idea about this one was a chance to hide and to take out your enemies that follow you into the fog. But it seems that not everybody is sharing my opinion about the first 7 points, so thanks for your comment on them. But the 8th point is NOT my fault, because I used no caulk there! You can see through the walls because of the sky texture and not because of the caulk! This is something I read some time ago in a tutorial you have to watch out where to put a skybox-texture, for example the windows in the 3. stage, you can see through them the little roof I built, it is kinda strange, I haven't changed it because I thought there could be a solution for it, but there doesn't exist any solution for that, I tried it!! Okay, now I will download your map...

P.S.

Does this mean you'll comment on my map, MonkeyMadness?

Har, har!

One less download to get to 300! Woohoo!

Anyway. The map wasn't bad for a first map. Of course there are several things you could have done to improve the map but since it's yer first....I'll give you lots of slack!

I agree with the reviewer and warmachine...the red fog on the lower level shouldn't be there....too thick to see thru.

Also, just some thoughts:

1. The ramps going to the teleporter seem a bit too steep to feel comfortable.

1. The teleporter platform itself could have been a bit larger...all brawls in that area ended with the combatants falling off to the basement.

1. The extra rocket launcher and lightning gun (the ones near the center area and NOT the ones in the little hallways) seemed a bit out of place. I think if you nuked them and kept the RL and LG in their respective hallways, the map would work better.

1. The map seemed kinda smallish and cramped somehow....even in the open center area. Maybe if the map was a little larger on the whole, it would have a better feel.

1. The highest hallway level seemed kinda barren with the green healths and single armor shard in each of the four corners.

1. Their was a bit too much ammo on the lower level.

1. Texturing could have been a little better....it seemed kinda bland but you probably already knew that.

1. Near the Quad...those two windows...you can see the caulk texture on the outside of the walls allowing you to see inside the map from there...I've seen this mistake on a lot of maps, even those new Rocket Arena maps. If you can see any other part of the map, it should be either textured or clipped off so you can't see it in the first place.

That's it for now.

Again, for a first map, not a bad start.

You'll only get better at it!

Later.

Yehaaa, only 31 more downloads to get the "magic" 300, hehe, oh man I'm talking shit! :) Hey guys, why don't you comment on my map, warmachine did and I didn't kill him, did I? So come on co-mme-nt co-mme-nt!!! Or mail me, please...

hehe, warmachine have you downloaded my map 228 times, or why are you the only one to comment on it?? ;) hehe, just joking, well my new map will be, I do not know when it will be published here, I sent it in 3 days ago, and because THIS level was published one month after I sent it in, I don't know when they are going to publish my new one. But if you can't wait to see it, head over to www.quake3stuff.com and look at the results of the mapping contest. On place 7 you will find my new map "Deathmatch [bbB]". Unfortunately they printed my real name and not my nick...

hehe when is your new map going to be on lvl, this is becoming a two way chat lol sya bomerlunder... :) WarMachine

Let me give you an advice for mapping, do not publish your first map anywhere, you see what happens with my map, almost no one thought i was nice. But my next map is muuuch better, I already sent it in...

you do better than me, i still havent made a map to lazy to stuff around with q3a tools, one day i will start making maps i hope, looks like alot of work ........ happy fraggen WarMachine hehe :)

Yes I know, it is not the best map, but it is my first one. I think I will never again publish a first map, well can't do anything about it now. Hope you enjoy the map anyway...

my typing is not the best at the moment need some sleep i think

my comments dont like the item placments red fog down the bottem is to much i do like sitting up top with the quad with a rocket @ granade l over all dont really like it much sorry bomberlunder but thats only my taste

im downloading now make a comment after ive played it :)

No comments ??? Hm, feel free to make some!!